It’s printed and bound… Phew. Here are some of the spreads. Already spotted some areas for improvement…
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great effort. great cover but the type didn’t need to go on top. the type just needs to be way cooler. could have been a band on / transparent cover with minimal type. the picture editing combined with col type looks good though.
Thanks Tony! For what it’s worth I’m not happy with the cover either. It was a bit of an afterthought to be honest. My original idea (which I still want to pursue) was to do something with letterpress to re-create something like that image but I like your other ideas too. Still lots more to be done for the final assessment!
Type hierarchy is not quite right either. I’m not sure the headings bursting through the hanging line really work. I’ve done it on the verso only so would be interested in your view. There needs to be another weight, size, position for the sub-sections within the Inspiration chapter (Chewing Gum Man, Pothole Gardener).
Right, back to my evaluation…
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